This chapter fucking sucks. I'm not even going to hide it. No matter how much I look at it, no matter how often I tweek it...it just sucks, through and through. I'm truly ashamed of my writing on this one. I utterly and completely apologize for what I must do.
...I'm doing it over. From about Pg5 to Pg30, it's just the worst crap I've written since my Bleach story 'Das Tier in Mir' on fanfic.net like 4 years ago.
Again, I am very sorry. In good conscience, I just can't publish this piece of garbage. It seemed okay in writing, but when I started drawing it...I realized it was because I hadn't thought-out the imagery that would end up going with it. I'm starting to think was a chapter I wrote when I was really tired or something, cuz....ugh, man, it's awful. I haven't written Ulquiorra so OOC before. His lines are terrible. The pacing is worse. The flow is botched and the point I was trying to make is lost on the fact that the rest of it is so bad.
I'll try to recycle as much existing art as I can so I don't have to do it all from scratch, but pretty much everything Ulquiorra thinks, says and does after the colored pages I did at the start are so ridiculously out of character that it would make some AU fanfics look like the works of Twain or Shakespeare. Maybe I'll post them to my scraps later just so folks can see what a travesty it was.
Again, I am so sorry ;____________ ;