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This chapter fucking sucks.  I'm not even going to hide it.  No matter how much I look at it, no matter how often I tweek it...it just sucks, through and through.  I'm truly ashamed of my writing on this one.  I utterly and completely apologize for what I must do.



...I'm doing it over.  From about Pg5 to Pg30, it's just the worst crap I've written since my Bleach story 'Das Tier in Mir' on fanfic.net like 4 years ago.  

Again, I am very sorry.  In good conscience, I just can't publish this piece of garbage.  It seemed okay in writing, but when I started drawing it...I realized it was because I hadn't thought-out the imagery that would end up going with it.  I'm starting to think was a chapter I wrote when I was really tired or something, cuz....ugh, man, it's awful.  I haven't written Ulquiorra so OOC before.  His lines are terrible.  The pacing is worse.  The flow is botched and the point I was trying to make is lost on the fact that the rest of it is so bad.

I'll try to recycle as much existing art as I can so I don't have to do it all from scratch, but pretty much everything Ulquiorra thinks, says and does after the colored pages I did at the start are so ridiculously out of character that it would make some AU fanfics look like the works of Twain or Shakespeare.  Maybe I'll post them to my scraps later just so folks can see what a travesty it was.

Again, I am so sorry ;____________ ;
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sandmanda Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011
That's okay! I'll wait forever! I really like your comic because it's an alternate to the manga, and I think it makes the battle more interesting!!
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inginuyasha Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
It's fine ^_^ I'm sure everyone will wait patiently. Don't post the scraps if you don't want to, especially if you don't like it. You're the artist of this comic, what you say goes so don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Again take your time ^-^ No Rush!
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J2Wolf Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student General Artist
It's ok. We'll wait as long as t takes you, well I will. If you think it's bad then, yeah it probably is. Take your time as long as it takes!
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NatpH Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
Better 1 chapter than 1 Redux. It's hard to wait that long... XD
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AshaKeres Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
It's all right! Take your time ^__^
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BordellaArcane Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student Writer
We understand, what you put up should be something you are proud of. No great artist I know can ever boast on "I did it perfect the first time through", the fact that you refuse to put up art that you aren't proud of means you aren't going at it half-assed. XD
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KoltirasRip Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, I'm fine with the art. It's just lousy storytelling.
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heart-paramore Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
It's okay. We all understand. Just, don't beat yourself up over it too much, alright? No need for apologies. :hug:
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BlueInfinity23 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student Artist
Rip, I don't think anyone is gonna raeg at you for redrawing it if you're ready to throw the children around your area, off the cliff. ;P
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Aen-Riv Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
Better late than never, better safe than sorry, and better be satisfied with the result before everything else ^^
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Ebony-of-the-Moon Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
Well we definetly dont want Ulquiorra to be too OOC..haha. Take as much time as you need until
your satified with your work. However I do think it would be really great if you posted it in your
scraps for now. And then you could just take it back down once you upload the new version.. :]
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KoltirasRip Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll post it after. Last thing I need is for people to see it and think it's 'just fine the way it is.' I hate that. it's like people don't respect me as an author.
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Ebony-of-the-Moon Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011
ahh, yea i see what you mean..
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Evello Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student General Artist
If you aren't satisfied with it, its okay not to post it. I don't post stuff that I don't like because it bothers me for the rest of my life XD
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YukaTheDemon Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
You know what? Im kind of glad your not posting it. Like Suospuli pointed out "...This just shows that you won't feed us crap and expect us to like it. You take care of your readers and you take care of the quality of your work, if that's not dedicated then I don't know what is."
I appreciate that you are taking your time and putting in so much effort for us to really enjoy your work. :D

Though, I am sorry that it didnt turn out the way you wanted and have to go back and redo it. Lets hope you can reuse a bunch of the pictures, so they all dont go to waste.
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HikaruFan555 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
Please don't apologize for taking your time to make your work enjoyable and precise. Making a work IC and study takes time, whether it be fanfiction, fanart, or fancomic. In fact, one of the reasons I enjoy your work so much is that you actually take the time (which so many people do not) to think things through and logically explore situations in your stories that actually seem possible and IC. For the quality of work you give, it is well worth any wait we have to endure, I assure you. And anyone that disagrees is under-appreciative and can kiss my shiny metal ass. Amen.
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SelenaEstella Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, oh well then. Do what you see fit :) I think I'd rather a late but BRILLIANT Redux over on-time yet RUBBISH Redux. (Though I won't complain if you post some of the first version ;) Redux is what helps me through life's crap~!)
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XxShipuxX Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
Take your time :3
If you want to re-do it, you really should. But I would really like to see what you did so far D:
I lack your awesome art ;__;
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smylealong Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
Chill. It happens to everyone. Sometimes if something doesn't meet your expectations for yourself, it is really tough to continue working on it. All the best with the new version.
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Florchus Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Awww don't worry, Rip. ^^ It happens to everyone (meaning: it happens to me ._________________.)! :)
You are awesome, and I think everyone can wait!!! :D Is worth the wait :3!

(and sorry for my terrible english TT_TT)
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akagi-chan Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
it happens. good luck on the second time around.
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red-winged-angel Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's alright. :hug:
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Xx--mana--xX Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
We'd much rather you be 100% behind it and wait longer for a good quality peice rather than have something you've only drawn half heartedly :P
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ShOrtSh4dow Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
Remaking shit is your thing. it's cool. ;D
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ErinKarsath Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Never feel like you need to rush for us. I think we're all willing to wait until you're happy with it. :)

*Adds to the hugs*
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TallTails Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I believe; if the artist is happy with it, it's good. No matter what everyone thinks about it.
Take your time and finish it the way you like it. XP
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NaveraFuerbrand Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
Take your time =)
We can wait, if only everyone though like you then we wouldn't have so many shitty animes >__< Kubo should take a lesson from ya lol
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IridiumFlames Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student General Artist
YO, I second this. Proofreading sometimes involves throwing out huge sections o' work.
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DaiGurrenDrift Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
If only kubo woulda thought twice before releasing a chapter... sigh... good luck with the re-write. At least you're not starting the entire thing over again XD
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BlackWolfGrimm Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Take all the time that you need to do what you gotta do. Either way, I'll look forward to a new chapter=D
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CreepingBoNE Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh well, look on the bright side; we get two versions of the chapter~! *rubshandstogethergleefully*
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Suosopuli Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
Where are all the comments? Tense silence, anyone?

Okay, I don't hide it, I am disappointed. I knew beforehand that this particular tuesday wouldn't be a good day and still won't be a good day (since there's some of it left in here where I live) and a new chapter of Bleach Redux would've taken the edge off of this day...

...still I'm not as disappointed as I should be. First this was somewhat expected and second, this just shows that you won't feed us crap and expect us to like it. You take care of your readers and you take care of the quality of your work, if that's not dedicated then I don't know what is.

Plus, you're having a tough time right now in the work front and you have an actual life that has it's own duties. This is understandable.

So, take your time. Patience is a virtue : )
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enight223 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
take your time! I don't want to read it if you don't think it's good! No need to rush yourself!
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maewie Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
No worry! Take your time:)

*hugs* (I'm pretty sure you need one)
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