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December 13, 2011


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This chapter fucking sucks.  I'm not even going to hide it.  No matter how much I look at it, no matter how often I tweek just sucks, through and through.  I'm truly ashamed of my writing on this one.  I utterly and completely apologize for what I must do.

...I'm doing it over.  From about Pg5 to Pg30, it's just the worst crap I've written since my Bleach story 'Das Tier in Mir' on like 4 years ago.  

Again, I am very sorry.  In good conscience, I just can't publish this piece of garbage.  It seemed okay in writing, but when I started drawing it...I realized it was because I hadn't thought-out the imagery that would end up going with it.  I'm starting to think was a chapter I wrote when I was really tired or something, cuz....ugh, man, it's awful.  I haven't written Ulquiorra so OOC before.  His lines are terrible.  The pacing is worse.  The flow is botched and the point I was trying to make is lost on the fact that the rest of it is so bad.

I'll try to recycle as much existing art as I can so I don't have to do it all from scratch, but pretty much everything Ulquiorra thinks, says and does after the colored pages I did at the start are so ridiculously out of character that it would make some AU fanfics look like the works of Twain or Shakespeare.  Maybe I'll post them to my scraps later just so folks can see what a travesty it was.

Again, I am so sorry ;____________ ;
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sandmanda Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011
That's okay! I'll wait forever! I really like your comic because it's an alternate to the manga, and I think it makes the battle more interesting!!
inginuyasha Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
It's fine ^_^ I'm sure everyone will wait patiently. Don't post the scraps if you don't want to, especially if you don't like it. You're the artist of this comic, what you say goes so don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Again take your time ^-^ No Rush!
J2Wolf Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student General Artist
It's ok. We'll wait as long as t takes you, well I will. If you think it's bad then, yeah it probably is. Take your time as long as it takes!
NatpH Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
Better 1 chapter than 1 Redux. It's hard to wait that long... XD
AshaKeres Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
It's all right! Take your time ^__^
BordellaArcane Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student Writer
We understand, what you put up should be something you are proud of. No great artist I know can ever boast on "I did it perfect the first time through", the fact that you refuse to put up art that you aren't proud of means you aren't going at it half-assed. XD
KoltirasRip Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, I'm fine with the art. It's just lousy storytelling.
heart-paramore Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
It's okay. We all understand. Just, don't beat yourself up over it too much, alright? No need for apologies. :hug:
BlueInfinity23 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student Artist
Rip, I don't think anyone is gonna raeg at you for redrawing it if you're ready to throw the children around your area, off the cliff. ;P
Aen-Riv Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
Better late than never, better safe than sorry, and better be satisfied with the result before everything else ^^
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