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Spoilers.  Duh.

So the episode wasn't like...a huge deal, but rarely does the first episode of any season pack a punch.  The first episode is just bringing you back to what you saw before.  Episode 2 and on, with the climax in episode 9, and a winding down whimper of a 10th episode, is usually how the series goes.

Pretty much every question I had from last season was answered, at least.

We know Sansa and Theon survived the fall.  That was spoiled in the previews of the season weeks ago.  But it was nice to finally have Brienne win at something.  She FINALLY had something go her way.  I'm only disappointed that we didn't get to see Stannis' body, cuz the way Brienne swung her sword last season looked pretty suspicious.  I wouldn't normally accept a character death unless I saw the body on screen.  To me, it looked like Brienne hit the tree.  Ah well.  I dunno where they'll go from there...maybe they'll keep heading towards Castle Black and Jon will be resurrected by the time they arrive, and then all of them go to get the Boltons out of Winterfell.

Dany...was actually treated pretty well, but I'm shocked that the Dothraki Screamers didn't recognize her.  I feel like the two that were conversing about her netherparts were part of Drogo's khalisar back in the day.  The fact that this new Khal treated her with a modicum of respect once she revealed she could speak Dothraki and that she was the widow of Drogo...that was pretty neat.  But lol, Dany should've known she'd be packed up and shipped to Vaes Dothrak.  In the books, I recall she actually thinks about that when they were there way back in the day, and it scared her to think she'd be with those old crones if Drogo died before her, and she wasn't in Westeros at the time.

Tyrion wandering around with Varys...I feel like they're taking real serious liberties here.  They just got ambushed and all nearly died in the Fighting Pits...what in the world makes them think there aren't more Sons of the Harpy floating around to get them?

Jorah and Daario...I knew they'd find Dany's path by following the direction Drogon flew, and that they'd find her ring because of the circle of horse-prints trampling the ground around where she stood.  I don't know why most others didn't think the same thing.  It's like they think that Jorah just got lottery-winner lucky on that find.  It's, think about how many horses were circling Dany when she dropped the ring.  The fact that there's still grass there is the only surprising part.

Arya...her story isn't super interesting to me right now.  I've felt for a long time that she could be cut from the series like Bran was and no one would notice.  I hope that her shit picks up soon cuz I'm getting pretty bored with the Faceless Men training.

Cersei and the rest of the Lannisters...blargh.  What happened to Bron?  Did I forget something? was pretty neat to see her real self for once.  I'm surprised she would end the Glamour in such a time and place though.  If someone barged in, she wouldn't have the young face on and people would be all confused.  Maybe she'll get her shit together and resurrect Jon next episode though.  I can't see why the showrunners would bother showing the resurrection abilities of Red Priests (ie: Brotherhood Without Banners, the resurrection of Berrick Dondarrion or however you spell it, after being cleaved near in half by The Hound) if they weren't gonna have another Red Priest do the same on someone else.  They already omitted the Lady Stoneheart story, so if they're giving that plot line to Sansa, then the resurrection line ought to go to Jon. 

Doran got spiked.  I think that was the only 'oh shit' moment of the whole episode.  I lol'd when Tristan got speared through the back of the head.  I was hoping one of them would call him an idiot as they passed, but no one said

All in all...interesting.  Next week ought to be better though.  Maybe we'll finally get to see the Tower of Joy stuff since we're getting back to Bran, and we've seen the scenes in the previews already, so we know it's coming.  Maybe we see the Tower of Joy and THEN Jon gets resurrected.  That'd be sweet.


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LadyArha Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015
Oh! i ended up re-reading Redux and Ediolon again (just now i finish except for the fanfic part, which i will continue to re read :D)

But i got a question, you said u did some doujins of Hellsing, but i can't fin them, could you point me in the right direction ? :)
KoltirasRip Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
But, I'm 4 pages from finally posting the second half of Ch11, so hopefully once that's online, I can get back to my otherwise semi-normal update schedule because I won't be bogged down with the resentment of having to redo all those pages after losing my HD.  All but like 3 pages had to be completely replaced, so it's taken like twice as long to get it done just because I hate redoing art.
KoltirasRip Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I did those more than a decade ago (2001-2004.)  They aren't online anymore and I no longer have copies to post.  The first one was just a long-winded fanfic that was really poorly written and was stopped without being completed.  The second and third attempts (at the same story, kinda like how I did a second and third version of the Redux due to art quality and storytelling) were just a retelling of the original manga (which I had discovered after doing the first one) with an added original character.  The second attempt featured a former friend's OC named Adrian, whom I'd been lent to unfuck a plot that I had painted myself into a corner with.  The third retelling, I had changed Adrian into Gabriel because of a falling out with said former friend.  The only resemblance is the fact that both toons have long blond hair.  They're entirely different people otherwise...personality, background, height/weight, skills, etc.  The Hellsing version of Gabe was aligned with the Vatican but had 'escaped' from Iscariot due to differences of opinion on the matter of the Lance of Longinus myth.  I had decided that the lance wasn't just a spear, but a lineage passed down through the descendants of the Roman soldier who had actually used it to piece the side of Jesus.  The modern-day mythology says that whoever was in possession of the Lance would be granted victory in battle, and it was said that Hitler found it, and later American forces took it into possession...but, in my Hellsing doujin, the "lance" with the powers was Gabe's bloodline and he left the Vatican because he didn't want to be used anymore.  I forget what I had plans for but IIRC Gabe was eventually gonna find the Lance of Longinus spear/relic and destroy it so he could get peace in his life and maybe break the curse.  I never got that far though.  Only far enough for Intregra to get busted out of the jail she was in at the end of the TV series and back into her office.  That was about it.  It was extremely immature writing and very pretentious.  The art was also awful.
LadyArha Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015
oh, arite. 
Well! i liked a lot the last redux version and the current ediolon, so ill be waiting for the second half of the chap 11th. !!

Great work on both :D!!
Lightybug Featured By Owner May 16, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
I saw on facebook you said you weren't getting any feedback and I felt bad because I usually leave some, but I was dying through AP exams the past two weeks so I didn't have a chance to comment on smackjeeves! I loved the first half of chapter 11! :D So excited the updates are starting regularly again! The story is getting so exciting and I'm super excited omg ouo (your art is amazing as usual!)
KoltirasRip Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah it was really kinda freaking me out that no one was commenting on anything, anywhere.  Not even on FaceBook.  I mean, I could continue this comic even if only one other person was reading it and excited about it, but how am I supposed to know the one person is out there when ZERO people comment?  Faving on DA takes a button means practically nothing.  I was worried I was gonna have to hang my hat because the story was taking too long to get moving.

Comparatively speaking, the chapters I'm working on right now are like the raid on the SHINRA office tower in FF7 right before you meet Sephiroth and get cut loose into the world.  Nothing has -truly- happened yet, but there's still some work to be done before stuff DOES get rolling.  I'd say that once this mini-arc is done and the character development can really get rolling, that's when (at least IMO) the story starts to get some real personality.

I just can't believe that in July I'll have already been working on this story for 2 years and I'm still not at Ch20 XD;;
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magoleth Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't believe I haven't subscribed to you yet here. I've been following your comic "Eidolon" for quite some time on Inkblazers (sadly to shut down soon) and I really like it, so I wanted to continue reading it ^^

I like the story and the characters are very likeable. I'm waiting for the future updates! ^^
KoltirasRip Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a bunch!  I was going to provide a link on InkBlazers with the update I'll be posting tonight, so everyone who reads it knows to come here or to SmackJeeves instead.  Glad you found your way over!
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